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Friday, May 31, 2019

This is my poem that me and my friends made

A survivor
Lingerineine greens
The long flowing gras
My family dropping
My animal friends crying
Blood of my family
The fur of my dead mum
I’m not safe
Is my family okay
Revenge
A survivor    
By Jahdin, Josiah, Timana and kyle.

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  1. AnonymousJune 21, 2019 at 9:20 AM

    it is nies

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2019 at 12:08 PM

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    2. AnonymousJune 21, 2019 at 12:11 PM

      Hey thanks for that comment

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  2. AnonymousJune 21, 2019 at 9:27 AM

    Hi i am Zoe from papakura central school i am a year 5 age 9 i like you post but maybe next time you could talk a bit louder

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2019 at 12:07 PM

      okay thank you for that egvist

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